poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:


Funny how one tear turns in, two
Three, four, how far will those tears
Go? Over and help her,
She isn't happy you can see,
In her eyes is dispair
Of the world around her
Not how her hair looks, today
Someone was murdered down her street.
Bang Bang Bang
Her mum at her, door
Flung open, she is screaming
'Tidy your room'
A pig sty, a sty only fit for
A pig. You are an, animal(s)
Aren't fit for living here.
Pull yourself together.
Slam. Bang. Crash. Ouch.
Tripped, fell, crashed, flew
Tidy the mess of her mum(s)
Worlds crash to the floor as
Children cry, scream, shout
Broken leg. Stupid woman
Grab your little girl, your even smaller boy
Get out of that hell
Quick. Kid call an ambulance
9          9          9
I need you. Help
The people are, dying of
Pain, her leg. Broken
Hearts as loved ones die at
The adress of?
Rose Cottage
Haywards Heath
The world.
               Needs help?

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