poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Help.
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Funny how one tear turns in, two
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Three, four, how far will those tears
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Go? Over and help her,
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She isn't happy you can see,
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In her eyes is dispair
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Of the world around her
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Not how her hair looks, today
 7
Someone was murdered down her street.
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Shot.
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Bang Bang Bang
 10
Her mum at her, door
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Flung open, she is screaming
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'Tidy your room'
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A pig sty, a sty only fit for
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A pig. You are an, animal(s)
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Aren't fit for living here.
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Pull yourself together.
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Slam. Bang. Crash. Ouch.
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Tripped, fell, crashed, flew
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Down
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        The
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             Stairs
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Tidy the mess of her mum(s)
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Worlds crash to the floor as
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Children cry, scream, shout
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HELP.
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Broken leg. Stupid woman
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Grab your little girl, your even smaller boy
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Get out of that hell
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Quick. Kid call an ambulance
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9          9          9
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I need you. Help
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The people are, dying of
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Pain, her leg. Broken
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Hearts as loved ones die at
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The adress of?
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Rose Cottage
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Haywards Heath
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England
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The world.
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               Needs help?
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