poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

My Life is Growing Shorter
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My life is growing shorter
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And my breaths are getting weak
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I try to tell you certain things
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But somehow i cannot speak
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Im starting to fade
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Off into the day
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My life is growing shorter
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Still theres nothing i can say
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I try my hardest to tell you
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But my lips are somehow sealed
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So if i fade away tonight
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You'll never know how i did feal
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If i dont tell you
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Then how will my soul be "set free?"
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My life is growing shorter
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So i guess it was meant to be
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All i really wanted to say
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Was that i love you
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And all i was hoping you to say
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Was that you loved me too
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But to you i cant speak these words
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For fear of rejection
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All i really wanted
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Was for you to show some afection
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But now i have faded
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My soul was never set free
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All because i didnt tell you
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How much you meant to me
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