poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Tic Tock
Isabelle5

You dangle on the second hand,
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crying out as mid-night strikes,
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begging refuge and rescue
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from me, a fallen angel keeping track
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of how many humans dance
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on the end of a sword.
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I keep my wings in a steel knapsack
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of Amazon green - a golden parrots beak
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the lock, a bloody claw the key.
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I offer you neither,
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slipping out at 11:59,
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a whispered departure
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made on slippered feet.
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You scream at my back,
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“Angels don’t have feet,
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you bitch!”
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Grinning, I add another head to my count.
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