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Random Poem:

It's not my life. [changes]
forevergone

Looking into the frying pan
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as my only affordable mirror,
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I wonder, "Is this where I'm supposed to be?"
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I know I'm not perfect.
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Well, really who is?
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But why did God dump me off here?
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I'm sure this is just a hard test,
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I can cheat my way out of.
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"GET OUT, I said get the..."
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   "I would barely call this.."
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I try to tune them out.
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It's in their nature to fight.
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But I always watch them go at it.
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Hoping...they will stop.
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After the yelling, the screen door slams shut.
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I run to the broken window; knowing my dad
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will take a short walk to redeem himself.
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But he always comes back.
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I hear the engine of our never used car start.
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My mother runs in the middle of the street,
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still cussing and waving her arms.
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((probably thinking she can get him back))
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Which is a useless thing to do.
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I watch the car drive away,
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to vanish in the night.
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Now leaving everything silent; forever.
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I relive the same life everyday.
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Well, I'd like to think of it anyway, as my mother's life.
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