poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Our ABC
sosfatman

got their hands in our pockets
 1
with the promise of a tug
 2
yet nothing but a red glove
 3
massaging...
 4
my wallet...
 5
pulling...
 6
out my money
 7
munching...
 8
on my liberty
 9
 
 
giving head
 10
....
 11
of cabinet positions
 12
to doddering fools
 13
sticky-stuck-fuck
 14
kept together
 15
with band-aid
 16
stolen funds from live aid
 17
musk stick stuck
 18
in their anooss'
 19
allowing them cuck
 20
-olding out Laissez-faire
 21
 
 
the invisible hand
 22
which i wish to break
 23
force it to clean my colon
 24
of all the shit
 25
ABC has made me consume
 26
which my body couldn't exhume
 27
 
 
force-fed by Scandinavian sized bureau-fats
 28
like the parasites in my tummy
 29
feeding off the scraps
 30
of our income
 31
impregnating our women
 32
with stalin's sticky-icky
 33
 
 
who calls himself aunty
 34
....the child molestering aunty
 35
that steals your innocence
 36
bottles it
 37
sells it as the elixir of fuck
 38
 
 
muck
 39

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