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Random Poem:

To My Mother
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I remember, as your baby,
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Thinking you the center of everything.
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That all knowledge to be known belonged to you alone,
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That your mind held libraries, a wit so sharp it could kill.
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You were Athena, fierce and proud and knowing,
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as unbreakable as steel.
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I remember, as your little one,
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the first time I saw you cry.
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Not the leaked tears that trickled as you yawned (huh-thumb),
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But sobbing, small and shaking, as my father held your shoulders.
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Your mother had died. You sat at the kitchen table
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and I stood, barefoot, in the hall, watching.
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You were no longer unbreakable,
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But I still knew you to be strong.
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I remember, as your child,
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You slapping fried eggs down on that same kitchen table
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With a fervor I had not seen in years, saying “Eat.”
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I tried to burn, fierce and proud, but I had learned that trick from you,
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And you knew how to ignore it.
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I ate.
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I know you, now,
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as a woman who tried her best
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with a daughter that snarled and glared and skidded, unsuccessfully,
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into high school.
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I was a hateful beast that you could not tame,
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(And I think, sometimes, that I still am,)
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but you tried.
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Thank you.
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I will not talk to you about this poem.
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I am not able to say these things out loud, which is why
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I have written them here.
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But know that I love you
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And that you have made me fierce
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and proud.
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