poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Random Poem:

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Rain fell on the paved footpath
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It was a bittersweet way to a start.
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Silences hang so heavy on me
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I'm not sure if you saw,
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as lately I've felt them more lightly.
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Shadowing presence,
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behaviour extrinsic,
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I often wonder if you recall
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these little things held so dear,
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or think about me at all.
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Allow one to see the you truly,
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let drift the veil and masquerades,
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at least let me keep which I have found
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in of late.
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To have just caught a glimpse out of hand slight,
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you are the best actor not on stage; So am I.
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Walls will fall down in time
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(Though exist purely so)
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Like falling sunbeams
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which filter through trees
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"komorebi I will always remember"
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Because of me.
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