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Random Poem:

Daddies' Girl
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You know
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that Dad of mine
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is one of a kind
 3
 
 
No matter how irritating he can be
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No one seems to mind
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His jokes are corny and
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he sleeps alot
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But he rests with one eye open
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so my brothers and I always get caught.
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He can fix just about anything
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so I think I'll keep him around
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and he shook hands with a Senator
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so I figure the money should be pooring
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in bounds.
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Who else, but me
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to inherit that cash
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but the oldest child
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I might not spend it wisely though
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Because its my dad's genes
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that make me wild
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But my dad has taught me when I am
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supposed to act like an adult
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if I ever mess up
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he doesn't ever hold me at fault
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He smiles and winks in order to remind me
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of the lady I am supposed to be
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I know I owe him so much
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but my Dad is quick to forget the
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debts of his daughter and such
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There are times when his constant right answers
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and I Told Ya So's
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make me mad
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but all these past things
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are why
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I Love my Dad
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