poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Dawn Chorus
larrylark

Woke, duvet draped, in early morning floating hour,
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while pigeons torment sleep from ivory towers.
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Weaned from deep snoring slumber,
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well before that swift rising molten core
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streams bright light over rust crumbled drain pipe tops,
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where each twig of a nest lies propped among  timbers,
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threatening to burn the street to a cinder.
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Fancy dan mother of pearl bird waves wings,
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turning through well grooved flight paths.
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Later one lay spread eagled,
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where traffic markings whitened the road.
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The fleeting symmetry of death stayed unnoticed.
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Stray cat foraging meat, splayed beneath severed feathers
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