poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Flaccid Moods of a Poet
DeathShards

A melody of heaven and hell
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I spoke
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to the strands of time
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I played like a guitar
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the morning breezes
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around my tired body, wove magically
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lengths and lengths of flaccid moods
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swaying gently
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between lush green hills
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lazy sun cradled asleep
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to my melodies of heaven and hell
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Vibrant white moon
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in the dark blue sky
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sang lullibies long forgotten
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to humans and animals alike
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under the vibrant moon I dreamed.
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Birds sang serene scenes
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as the wind blew lightly
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rustling leaves and trees alike,
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reluctant to rise, the sun drooped lazily
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and my alarm clock snapped me back to reality.
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