poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Animation Fascination
Derby

The silver screen
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lit up with so many beautiful colors
 2
the curves form imagry that we dream
 3
but cannot feel
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This blue is her hair and eyes
 5
The hair that flows from everywhere
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Her headband and school girl outfit
 7
but she is not real
 8
 
 
Her eyes squint to smile
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But she does not feel
 10
she is someone's drawing
 11
but she is my meal
 12
 
 
She can speak any language
 13
or not say anything at all
 14
She will undress for me
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but she cannot feel
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With my hands on happiness
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her smile enlightens my touch
 18
this little curious video
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spins on it's reel
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My eyes squint to smile
 21
It's all I can feel
 22
She relieves my pain
 23
While my soul heals
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I'll bleed in front of my computer
 25
maybe for the rest of my life
 26
But as long as I can imagine
 27
My skin will still peel
 28
This blue, Hentai girl
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lighting up my lonely afternoons
 30
She loves me so much
 31
but she cannot feel
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