poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Animation Fascination

The silver screen
lit up with so many beautiful colors
the curves form imagry that we dream
but cannot feel
This blue is her hair and eyes
The hair that flows from everywhere
Her headband and school girl outfit
but she is not real
Her eyes squint to smile
But she does not feel
she is someone's drawing
but she is my meal
She can speak any language
or not say anything at all
She will undress for me
but she cannot feel
With my hands on happiness
her smile enlightens my touch
this little curious video
spins on it's reel
My eyes squint to smile
It's all I can feel
She relieves my pain
While my soul heals
I'll bleed in front of my computer
maybe for the rest of my life
But as long as I can imagine
My skin will still peel
This blue, Hentai girl
lighting up my lonely afternoons
She loves me so much
but she cannot feel

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