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Random Poem:

Life's trivialities blues
CheBourdain7

Theme: How we react to the most trivial things in life represents our soul and state of mind.
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I was watchin CNN today
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and thank god
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I was in a good mood.
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If I were in a shitty state of mind
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I would've gotten a baseball bat
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and smash my set like clay.
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I was in the gas station,
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I was charged 45 dollars
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and thank god I was in a good mood.
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If I were in a shitty state of mind,
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I'd be cursin like a mofo all day.
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My best friend is once again
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pouring his heart out over his ex girlfriend
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and thank god I am in a good mood.
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If I were in a shitty state of mind
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I would knock his ass out to momentarily
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take him out of his dismay.
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Someone stared at me funny today
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and thank god I was in good mood.
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If I were in a shitty state of mind
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all I need is a good forearm shiver
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to blind his ass like Ray.
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