poetry critical

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Random Poem:

The Music We Made
HighonU

Sitting here,
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Music blaring.
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Thoughts racing
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Too many to handle,
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I am about to burst.
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Staring at your dark eyes,
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Missing you so much.
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Even though you’re here,
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Your not.
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Because she is here to.
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I don’t want her hear
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Please tell her to leave.
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I think you want her here.
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But I don’t! I want it like before
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When she was never near my thoughts of you.
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But now it seems she is slowly creeping in.
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Pushing past the music,
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Becoming,
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Creating,
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The music.
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When I don’t want her to.
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It didn’t bother me until,
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I awoke and realized I was in love.
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Now it just makes me so mad.
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If you want me I’ll be sitting here,
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Music blaring.
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Thinking of the fun we had.
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There she goes again,
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It’s too much to handle.
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Please miss me after I burst.
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