poetry critical

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Random Poem:

discontent with clouds
lester09

Simple pleasures deceive my heart.
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Give me a crown and I will give you
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a broken neck.
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Five days pass, five meals refused.
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My stomach hurts while my mouth
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fears involvement.
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I am not smart, but wisdom resides in me,
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for I buy a candle not only to warm my
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hand, but also to light my path.
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She speaks of a love so divine,
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but this love of hers
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I will never see.
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She knows I crave her body-every inch is
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where and how it should be.
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Simple pleasures once again deceive me.
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I am not one to look to you for rapture,
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for you, I know, cannot fill the void.
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But, through your view, I can see the
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rolling, white hills of winter,
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and when we touch
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I can feel the clouds upon which
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my feet desire.
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