poetry critical

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Random Poem:

bleached
spaces

i want to take
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a polaroid of how i feel
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right this moment.
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how intrinsically fragile.
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like a banked fire.
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no trolls to sit
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and flame it up again.
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my skin feels so cold.
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frigid, as ever, like
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china, like metal
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like plastic...i'm not real.
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i'm never real.
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i'm a violin case built to
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hold betrayal,
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and ice, and feathers.
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never the sun.
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and they invented quilts
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just so maybe i could get
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some rest,
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here in this old shell,
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a cracked whistle.
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more of a burble really.
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my head -- or
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that thing masquerading
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as it --
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aches at the temple;
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my fingers of their own
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volition finger the wound,
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self-inflicted
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though not as laughingly
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as you might think,
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just a failure in balance.
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another fifty quid i lost
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to gravity while gambling
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with myself on the
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bathroom counter.
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validity fades.
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easier to hold onto the
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nicks in the shell
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than admit there's nothing
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left inside, right?
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i don't know.
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i don't even know myself.
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