poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

my pillowcase misses your frigid embrace
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1. i should have let down my hair when you tugged on my braid, your nimble fingers tracing transparent tangles
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instead, i wrapped my hand around yours and offered to drive us down the coast with promises of sunshine and sweet lemonade
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2. the freezer section of the grocery store only reminds me of your breath, invigorating and icy, frosting my fragile bones and translucent skin; who knew my hair was the only thing left alive?
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3. you are all over my duvet, my lips and my hands, lividity aside-- when are you coming home?
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4. when you left the note on my dresser, the sunshine i felt down in santa cruz fills my callous chest, igniting what remains of the candles that keep vigil in the barren rivers of my ribcage
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5. open the door, i am here at last
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