poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

inside of a room fermenting
DeformedLion

i am so normal it makes me yawn,
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left the fridge open for the swan
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and picked it hollow- a bottle of shaded
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green and crystal fruits, drops.
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the shattered pieces, my feet, my eyes
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their is a stinging sensation like laughter
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and still the night is tattered,
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though it does not matter which,
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between light and dark there is flesh
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and some say curtains, but all i hear-
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  birds ticking on the clock,
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  round and round.
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without wings, still time flies and so i
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am given tribute to my mediocrity,
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crashed out in simple ideas, solvent sips,
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string-cheese metaphors.  the wreck
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of continuity.
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outside- a man with horns and velvet jacket
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his hands like precious art, i think i see
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him as myself, but i lie, inside of here
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where the clock is wound i bequeath
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my heart to a cork
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   watch as it floats away.
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