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Random Poem:

There is No Room To Cry In
Romanspring

There is No Room To Cry In
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On nights when I wanted to forget, I read,
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And the walls, lamps and desk were there to embrace me.
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When I came over to lie on the floor,
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The sun lit a stage light on my back, the room got dull and I said, “ I’m home in your house.”
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On days we wanted to be happy we sang,
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And the glass in the window seems to magnify the light.
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When I danced, the walls pushed us closer together and I felt your love breathing into my chest,
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Never was it just the wind.
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When I took a picture of three roses standing in your hands the flash whitewashed the comforting room,
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And I tried without the flash but it was too dark to see the harmony of the yellow, red and green.
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Now some days you hold three roses,
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But the room just stares.
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So now you cry and there are no pictures or roses to make you smile,
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The room just looks at you like it did something wrong
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The sun seems to be preoccupied with the sky, and the lights seem to shake like your hands when your blood is moving too fast.
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And that’s why we close our eyes to cry.
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