poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Heavens In Her Smile
wintersun

Rushes swept through me,
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as she graced my life,
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rushes devour me now,
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she's not by my side.
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I just wanted somebody,
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that no one would take,
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I can't describe the feelings,
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When my love she did forsake
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If hearts bleed, then let them.
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No forgives in me resides.
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If tears fall in solitude, (I don't care),
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For darkness is my bride.
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Heaven's in her smile,
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though painful to me.
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Heaven's in her smile,
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For all to see.
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If love knows no boundaries,
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and shows no hate,
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If heaven's graced with angels,
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then,this is my escape.
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My sorrow engulfs me
 21
Her beauty so rare
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My soul is in turmoil
 23
I long for her there
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If you read this my angel,
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you'll know I have gone.
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If you read this my darling
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It's to you I belonged.
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My spirit departed.
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You shattered my dreams.
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My love is all around you,
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in the sun's golden beams.
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