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Random Poem:

A mothers delusion:
sambaggett

A deluded mothers group
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Huddled in a corner
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Where are your troupes?-
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You so raised and thus aparently own
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Are they what you wanted them to be?
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Answer in the sincerest way
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There is no more time in this day
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For lies...
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So you dont see her in a white dress?
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Continuing the tedious cycle in the most traditional way
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Does it really matter-
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At the end of the day?
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Happyness and love
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The overused concepts in many a tale
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Are so precious-
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Especially if everything else should fail
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So you don't see me in a white dress?
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On the arm of a man
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Could I care less?
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I don't mearly exist to play out your hearts fulfillment-
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Your lifes master plan
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If you really are my mother then can't you just accept me for what I am?
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Instead of longing for me to change
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And fall in love with a man
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