poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Miserere
vida

When i look into your eyes i stand still,
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practice that stillness
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as i enter in your outer space,
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finding it in dashing pieces of light
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like the glass that breaks the early sun,
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we've all had dreams and we keep dreaming
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that someday the stars will fall,
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then while all the crazy people are screaming
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it'll reach us slowly all,
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i crawl to you
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passed the grey rainy clod
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as the worlds crashing into the sun
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and through fearsome clouds,
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where hurricanes and tornadoes turn one
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below the heavy whips of wind,
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nuclear bombs blows but only light my way
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this night sky will not be the end of us
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i'll define this darkest hour,
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for at this night at this time in this last line...
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I look straight, I look to you, I know where I go.
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