poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome!

Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Martha Stewart was a convict
lilyhammer

those velvet swatches make me sleepy
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delicate and green
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fuzzy like opals watery
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veins sunk deep deep down
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earth's crust would crumble without you probably
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I'd lay in a half empty tub of you I think
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fingers pressing half moons into the flesh
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cracked watercolor nails
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that I'll paint later to cover up the happenings of today
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I can't control you nor do I watch jittery as you do
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you are not my mother
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but she does like you for naming purposes
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you have that in common
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I'd like to be you I think
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for then in the mirror I'd see games and bees
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and plastic sparkle rings
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beaming out of the glass
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as if to say hello
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