poetry critical

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Random Poem:

All that I used to be
katlawr

I was the one you wrote to excited
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I was the voice at the end of the phone
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I was the rouge that stained your cheek
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But now I'm the one that's alone.
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I was the hand you grasped for comfort
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I was the bust that rested your head
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I was the thighs you pushed against sweaty
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But now I'm the dreamer of things left unsaid.
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Mine were the arms that sought your presence
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Mine were the tears that you couldn't dry
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Mine was the burden of fixing what's broken
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When all you could say was goodbye.
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