poetry critical

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Random Poem:

THank God Its The Post Christmas Sale
larrylark

Moon rocket docked in department store window,
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with cardboard cut flames shooting out of its thrusters.
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While puffed up salesperson holds deflating Santa,
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within touching distance of a large flurry panda.
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Among chimney top decor and twinkling lights
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a Mercury look a like sings “Thank God Its Christmas.”
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While last minute ladies are descending like locusts,
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desperate to spend all of  “his” Christmas bonus,
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on items made cheap for the post Christmas sales
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