poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Random Poem:

Lilly Underbelly
themorrigan

Lilly Underbelly
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(I named her so)
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Can you come over
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(before I have to go)
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Put away your crotch
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(I don't need a ho)
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Sell me a cigarette
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(I don't smoke it's just for show)
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so I can hear your drink-me-now voice
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(well when I'm sober she sounds like a crow)
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Let me snap you up and then print you out
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(in front of a camera I'm a pro)
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Just don't tell Jane my wife-the-insane
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(she's threatened to chop off my big toe)
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As a lover I can't have you, don't even want to
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(had enough that time I took her in the snow)
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but your snapshot moment presence I want to make mine
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(Sorry Jane my wife-the-insane).
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