poetry critical

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Random Poem:

young
unknown

all the time passing by
 1
and all these drops keep hittin you
 2
like its punishment
 3
never looked up
 4
always looked down
 5
knew where to go
 6
but didnt look around
 7
all the scences, you could use
 8
and all the smiple things you could
 9
escape from
 10
 
 
never felt, fear
 11
but still ran away from it
 12
but i still felt protection
 13
nobody knows
 14
what your thinking
 15
that you have those powers
 16
of making people do something
 17
by starring at thier invisible clear eyes
 18
 
 
imagination, never helped
 19
always had to try out the things
 20
by himself, no help
 21
as he saw the son and father
 22
walk by
 23
dont you get those kind of feelings
 24
 
 
im missing you
 25
never knew, you were always in back of me
 26
like its been so long
 27
but just in a blink of an eye
 28
you ended up in a different place
 29
 
 
the tricks and patterns
 30
that keeps happening to him
 31
cant he get it
 32
get the code
 33
and run away
 34
 
 
always escaping
 35
blending in throught the walls
 36
theres no sound of the wind
 37
to help you, move on
 38
but you cant take a step
 39
wind blew all the leaves around you
 40
 
 
and you though
 41
you just forgot the past
 42
but the places
 43
where you keep going again
 44
give you memory
 45
of your excepted mistakes
 46
 
 
you just want to keep on going
 47
you see theres an open space
 48
and you run
 49
with no control of speed
 50
then you realize with a gasp
 51
and not sure if you could
 52
balance at the egde of the
 53
other side
 54
that leads to somewhere
 55
where nobody has stepped on
 56
all of the sudden you fall
 57
why didnt he catch you this time
 58
why?
 59

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