poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:


all the time passing by
and all these drops keep hittin you
like its punishment
never looked up
always looked down
knew where to go
but didnt look around
all the scences, you could use
and all the smiple things you could
escape from
never felt, fear
but still ran away from it
but i still felt protection
nobody knows
what your thinking
that you have those powers
of making people do something
by starring at thier invisible clear eyes
imagination, never helped
always had to try out the things
by himself, no help
as he saw the son and father
walk by
dont you get those kind of feelings
im missing you
never knew, you were always in back of me
like its been so long
but just in a blink of an eye
you ended up in a different place
the tricks and patterns
that keeps happening to him
cant he get it
get the code
and run away
always escaping
blending in throught the walls
theres no sound of the wind
to help you, move on
but you cant take a step
wind blew all the leaves around you
and you though
you just forgot the past
but the places
where you keep going again
give you memory
of your excepted mistakes
you just want to keep on going
you see theres an open space
and you run
with no control of speed
then you realize with a gasp
and not sure if you could
balance at the egde of the
other side
that leads to somewhere
where nobody has stepped on
all of the sudden you fall
why didnt he catch you this time

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