poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

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mandm4e

Have you ever felt so depressed
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to the point you wished to die
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just to see who really cared,
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and at your funeral...who would cry?
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Have you ever examined your wrists,
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to see if your veins were clear
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so you can grab a knife and slice real slow
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without even shedding a tear.
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Wondering about when you were found,
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who would rush you to the hospital fast...
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Or think about the rumors that would spread
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and who would be the one to put you on blast?
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                          OR
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Would you go after that ONE person
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not caring there's nothing to gain,
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just thaat one thought in your mind,
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your giving them back all the pain.
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Well, you can say you've never had these thoughts
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and your life is as happy as can be,
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but trust me one day you will get them
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because this shit doesn't just happen to me.
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