poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Futility
RaynesEnd

I am a yesterday, a rip splitting
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the chasm of what was from what is,
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a September remnant among November winds.
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Though skeleton finger branches
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cling to their raiment
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these leaves, too, must carpet the cold ground:
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they are my wants and they are many.
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I lag twelve steps behind the flow of things
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trudging on clay feet,
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attempting to stop the tide with a plastic bag.
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I thought I could keep pace with love,
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but she is a sprinter while I can only crawl;
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she is here then gone in an instant.
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My cup overflows but liquid splashes unneeded,
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all the universe rendering it useless
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to the one I offered the glass.
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