poetry critical

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Random Poem:

small girl dreams
unknown

My gung-gung still claps his hands
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whenever he sees me, claps them slow
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and raises them above his head.
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until i've almost reached him; And then
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he crouches down aching back and knees with
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his arms open like he's gonna
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scoop me up.
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Sometimes I imagine I'm not a small girl anymore but these are things I am still afraid of
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1. cars
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2. boys
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3.
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1. i still cry when changing lanes. maybe i should just close my eyes. i don't like cars at night, especially cars with have windows. i have a mouth without an opening. it should be partially occluded you can see in but you can't see out. talk talk talk
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2. don't stick your elbows out.
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keep them close to your body.
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ftuck in your shirt.
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does it feel like a mouse?
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do you have a brother?
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feel dirty, feel sick.
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i think i'll go to bed.
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comes again to me in dreams.
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the same man, the same hands.
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3. (still ashamed)
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