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Random Poem:

From the Ashes of Descarte
Hadron

I once viewed the world in comfort with my
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realities though, I can no longer
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blindly take refuge in them; now aware
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there remains no sustainable thesis,
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no gospel that I can safely  build on--
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my initial beliefs fatally flawed.
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A crumbling foundation unable to
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support concepts I once perceived as truth,
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burdened with prior notions of a world
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out there, existing in separation
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from my inner being--my true essence;
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undone by the zen like world of quantum.
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A new apprehension emerging from
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the ashes of Descartes, who thought he was
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and, from his Cartesian view--therefore was.
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Though between mirage and reality--
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like the desert traveler with cupped hands;
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yielding only hot, undrinkable sand--
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lies the illusion of the magician's
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sleight of hand; things not always as they seem.
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While the quark and lepton dance hand in hand
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to the cosmic beat of uncertainty;
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common sense contradictions the new rule.
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My world transformed--new realities born
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as I gaze skyward, now able to see--
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the moon and the stars are a part of me.
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