poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Thank yourself

In a gentle slunder
i wonder and see you sleeping happily in your chair
living life to its very fullist and not wanted anymore
but you have a dark side
one you can not live with out
and you are terrified thats why you have no doubts
you are scared in terms of failure loosing your child that you have already lost but loveing your guilt in every way why do you do this
choosing him over me and pushing me into the gutter and out of the house for not accepting.
they say that this time in a teens life are supposed to be golden, but not for bobby not for me. when sitting around waundering aimlessly saying i am the fuckup when you just need to suck it up and listen to what i am saying and why i do this look at your self mom, they are stairing they are disqusted and grotesqued out of their minds in what you have done to me and yourself and his wife well i am through i hope you have  a fun life
without your yongest daughter
for this there is only one person you have to thank
and that person is you

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