poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Lost in Sherlock’s Home
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I wait by the letterbox.
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Every time the postman
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Leaves a letter my heart stops,
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I know that it has to be you this time.
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I also know it won’t be you ever again.
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Grudges. First loves. Old shoes.
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Fading memories. Outdated Almanacs.
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A picture I drew in the eighth grade.
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A note you passed me long ago.
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Emotions. Spoils. Preconceived
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Notions. Empty compliments.
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If things were meant to hold on to
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They would come with handles.
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Did Handel hold on to his Messiah?
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Even your beliefs can go away.
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Everyone has a time and it is coming.
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They say that if you love someone,
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You have to let them go.
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You’ll never let me go, I’m sure of it.
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I never really had a hold on you,
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But you’ll always have a hold on me.
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I’ll stop writing. I’ll stop waiting.
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I’ve long since stopped hoping.
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I will be happy if it kills me.
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Not because I want to, but just
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To spite you and your hold on me.
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I have become stronger. I have
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Entered a place where it’s going
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To be alright. I smile again.
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Not because I want to, but just
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To spite you and your hold on me.
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