poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Last Train into New York
pinwheel

Sometimes I want to jump onto
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the last train to New York
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and leave this little town behind,
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Sometimes I want to get lost
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walking through Central Park
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maybe see the penquins in the zoo,
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Sometimes I want to walk
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into F.A.O Schwartz
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and remember being a kid.
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Oh, I'm walking down Broadway
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trying to keep my head held high,
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but all of these lights are
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drowning out the sky
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Don't know what to make of it?
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Neither do I.
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Oh, I'm standing at the bottom
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of the Empire State Building
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remembering how small I am
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all of the sounds are drowning
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out the songs I'm singing in my head
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please tell me, where am i?
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Sometimes I want to jump
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in front of the last train to New York.
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