poetry critical

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Random Poem:

I Pine
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Danny, please, don't be a child.
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In a word I am whirled.
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In two words I am world-
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weary. I step out,
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empty windows of my neighbor's house
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yellow squares against a blue Bernal.
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I have taken
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to writing
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while riding
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my bike. Not the safest habit,
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to be sure. Danielle and I meet for coffee
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before Isla's bar
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for a drink.
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Please tell me you got her number.
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I--
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Well. She's in our circle of friends.
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So we come to talk about
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what we came to talk about
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after all. You know,
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I say, when you are drunk there is so much to say.
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I throw my hands up.
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Then you go to sleep and wake up. Who cares anymore!
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Someone grows
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to fill the room
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or escapes to leave it empty.
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I pine, it's what I do.
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