poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Fathers Love
idiotbox

o father of mine
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as i scream to you
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as i cry in pain
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you never heard me
 4
 
 
am i just your looser son
 5
or have i pissed you off
 6
for you never heard my cry’s
 7
or you never cared
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am i just a burden
 9
with my worthless cry’s for help
 10
for attention
 11
for your love
 12
 
 
i will make you happy
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i will leave your life
 14
maybe now you’ll love me
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for when i walk away
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but even then you say no words
 17
not even just a tear
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i know you never loved me
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i know you never cared
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