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Bye-bye and Buy Bonds!
lieskilllies

I thought back and watched -
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your hands writing
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on my hands
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on my teeth
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playing like piano keys.
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rusty heart feeding back
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pounding my...
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no,
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our ears into
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fuckin' oblivion.
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invisible guilt stains
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that won't come out of my
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dirty sheets
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that our mouths shit in.
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limp dicks
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and smiles to match them.
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It was as painful as late night commercial.
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12/31/06

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