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dirtyrock
sggunal

so dirtyrock
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her teeth feel like the spikes
 2
of the mohawk
 3
in her head
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each time
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she bares them pearly
 6
he needles poorly
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through a chosen
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narrow eye of hers
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a barely thread of his
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brownhawkjoe she grits
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your legs are like joints     wrap around
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your arms like monkey bars   swing around
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your face like onyx and moonstone
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circling around one another
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  with flint blades
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fighting
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shining
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  clouding
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reflectabsorbconfounding
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dear dear brownhawkjoe dear spiritoh i’m so close to
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Something stay
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01/21/07

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