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low head room

Inuki

hi there,	1
your impossible homework	2
failure to be backwards compatible;	3
someone brought bagels to work.	4

meek man	5
skeletal man, bony and spiralling ever upwards	6
hates the ritz.	7

we fly over skyscrapers,	8
your hair, a leathal weapon	9
staring down	10
at all the overly made up	11
putas, with mini skirts	12
and rain bonnets.	13

your mom is nice	14
wrapped in three layers of cellophane	15
singing the blues	16
lounging on a sexy black piano	17
in the upside down room.	18

in this crowded mound of earth,	19
in this haystack	20
where some make hell and harmony,	21
mother nature's many faces	22
crease as she smiles	23
her fatsuit attempting to encapsulate	24
all the lions	25
and imitation jungle lords.	26

i'm trying to shut up	27
out	28
against	29
but i think	30
i will suffer	31
a denial of service attack.	32

03/03/07

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