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drawing from the well of life
dustybottoms

clicking the crimson shoes together brought her home to my front porch.
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the doormat welcomes Dorothy, the doorbell calls to her;
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our eyes meet, our smiles parallel, our hands embrace.
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the sprint towards the wheat field is without purpose-
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we make crop circles of our own.
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the reeds crumble under red storms, thundering at a running pace.
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a dot in the distance neared with our bounds,
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the thirsty oasis draws nigh!
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the well, overwhelmed with the living liquid, beckoned our visitation, our knowledge.
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hands depart uniformly, eyes too scared to close.
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the body floats, separating from the clothes, the walls, the warmth.
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03/14/07

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