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Understanding Orin 101
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I want you sad,
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preferably in leather
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my lost lips
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tracing the corners
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of your dark,
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dirty mouth.
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I want you just the way you are-
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zoned out on Klonopin,
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at war with yourself
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and the rest of the world
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my frozen fingers finding warmth
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in the deliberate depths
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of your punk-ass pockets.
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05/24/08

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