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L-oo-k at me Please (you)
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Can't explain why I had
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to be everything you wanted
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me to become without
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sounding un-sung lyric-ally
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like someone's un-done
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romance with being your
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mom's best son while
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at-tempting to get some;
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Flush before you leave
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your pride floating in-candy
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-scent-ly for someone
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else to poke fun and
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treat you like you're
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not here to mock their
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done while he examines
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how to use your broken
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spine's drum and
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exhale-your-gasped
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protests with praise
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sung dumb leaving you
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half numb but feeling
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full-filled after being
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screwed under the sun.
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Praise you for making
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me a tool in your
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life's dreams as I bitter
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and tre(m)ble intern-aly
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and ex-press myself
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to wife and kids with
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insecurity; watch me
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self-destructibly loathe
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me to fullest and love
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you unconditionally and
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raise my son to please
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thee and live terrified
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of becoming me.
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07/03/08

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