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In Your Orbit
dreamergirl

I love the light
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streaming through the window
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and landing on your face,
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the colour of peace.
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I love your gaze -
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the way it follows me,
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the way I can feel it
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even when I turn around,
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the presence of your eyes.
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I love your hands,
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their cool touch on my arm,
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how my cheek tingles
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when you brush your fingertips against it.
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I love the calm that
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washes over me
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every time I look at you.
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I love your voice,
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I always have -
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it finds me in the quietest moments,
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and soothes my broken heart.
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07/03/08

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