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when eyes crawl ...

AlchemiA

in words	1
grace falls	2
from the page	3

falling down for quite some time	4
every soft silence is falling	5
every flying dream	6
falls swiftly down	7

every enjambment	8
every word	9
every note	10
falls down	11
to	12
your feet	13

where the beat	14
lifts it up	15

again	16

where you dance	17
it up	18

again	19

and feel your heart	20

again	21

where you lift your eyes	22
from the mud to the skies	23
looking like a fallen angel or a dirty saint	24

seeing the words	25
in the clouds and the rain	26
in the stars and galaxies filled with dust and fire	27
in the wars of men and the gathering of moths	28
in the sweetest honey mead and your broken guitar	29
in the sea and the wind and the shadows of the street	30
in the secret in your eyes	31

where you	32

see the spaces	33

where my pen gently aches	34

08/03/08

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