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Unreal
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Sterilize broken needles
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as tips ooze molten
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reason molded with gold;
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a god amongst men
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and a man amongst the
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kneeling.
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Watch me enjoy you
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telling me what I already know;
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crystal sins, the kaleidoscope
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of clarity breaks at dusk
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and is re-birthed unwillingly
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by day-break.
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Fly through boundaries self
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imposed or strategically
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entwined in man's psyche
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to keep him grounded  far
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from the open sky.
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Breathe now
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for deflated lungs
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and racing hearts
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won't earn you life
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but a glimpse of
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something more
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or less unreal.
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08/11/08

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