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More-knee can break-dance

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Smile you're now a working man	1
st(r)ing-ing along taste buds	2
cough-E in hand as you explore	3
come-here-shalls when they	4
command your re-tire-ment	5
plan and to-get-her you shall	6
stand alone scratching	7
with your violated plan	8
as fat boys dance their	9
tantric sexual stance of	10
hypnotic suggestions;	11
orientation irrelevant	12
as they command your	13
hand.	14


Cann'd under-stand why(ne)	15
intact pockets let the sand	16
in-fill-trait greedy toes,	17
judge not brand new (i)-shoes	18
as they walk the bit-shaky runways;	19
Why do I throw you	20
my pay-chic with a sly smile	21
that I describe as my interpret-nation	22
of moan-a-lease-a's sub-limit-less	23
mess-ages hidden in platinum gold	24
and non-existant bank accounts,	25
I pennyless schized in 2 worlds;	26
be-t(w)een awareness and childhood	27
fantasies as I speak in their products	28
and scream pretty-tease when I	29
dream of being debt-free .	30

Unsatisfied without what	31
you told me has got to be	32
"the only thing that I sold-immediately	33
need" in this world of shiny	34
tranquilities, sadly I'm genetically	35
needy and left quest-shun-ing	36
these creeds stuck on	37
diseased breeds of plastic	38
immaturity that grow with	39
these trick-her-ease	40
as I empty pockets on streets	41
and depart-mental stories	42
that snicker as I leave(s)	43
pleased and pray that	44
we return in threes.	45

08/24/08

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