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that one was for mother	1
and this ones for father	2
you fuck face	3
annoying bitch	4
pathetic money making idiot	5
i hate your fucking ass	6
sighs	7
you think your "little girl" will fall for your every move	8
crawling to the floor with your not so secretive apology's	9
daddy, im no little girl	10
im sorry that your mother fucked your father and had to have you	11
im sorry that mother and you had me!	12
maybe if you wouldn't have kept me in so much i wouldn't be gone	13
but you fucked up	14
you fucked up well daddy	15
your "little girl" hates your fucking ass	16
its too bad shes nothing like you	17
and its too bad that she doesn't like you at all	18
i remember the day i wrote that one for mother	19
she cried like a bitch	20
well haha this ones for you father	21
your welcome	22
you should be nothing but proud of your "little girl"	23

08/26/08

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