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Decision Never Made
Isabelle5

Saturdays, sadly, were our fight nights;
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we entertained our lesbian neighbors
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with our shouts and screams -
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they laughingly said they could listen best
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from their bathroom window.
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Little did I know that one dark-haired beauty
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dreamed I’d leave you, come to live with her.
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Her hand shockingly intimate
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on my thigh one night
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told me all she could not say.
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Your sudden appearance in the room
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and your hand hard on her shoulder
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told her all she needed to know.
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Neither of you asked my opinion;
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I still wonder what I would have said.
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08/27/08

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