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| Hiatus wanderlusted 28 Jan 08 10:57AM | Thread Closed |
I hadn't written a poem since Dec 11th, but I just finished a new one. Wow, that felt good.
Anyone else having the same problem recently?
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| re: Hiatus smugzy 29 Jan 08 1:23AM | Thread Closed |
I hardly write any of my poems down. They sit in my head, sometimes getting forgotten, sometimes getting written, depending on whether I find the time........now I'm going to look at your poem. :-)
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| re: Hiatus CervusWright 29 Jan 08 1:42AM | Thread Closed |
I haven't written a poem in over a year, but I look at the faces of the Indigenous that I advocate for, and listen to the music that flies from the fingertips of my son, and smell the breeze that tickles the gum trees around the estuary where I reside, and I realize, that I'm living one.
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| re: Hiatus trochee 29 Jan 08 1:43AM | Thread Closed |
> I hardly write any of my poems down. They sit in my head, sometimes
> getting forgotten, sometimes getting written, depending on whether I
> find the time........now I'm going to look at your poem. :-)
And i am going to see how you looked at it ;)
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| re: Hiatus smugzy 29 Jan 08 2:33AM | Thread Closed |
CervusWright, thanks for the insights. I love your words. Write some poems!!!!
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| re: Hiatus unknown 29 Jan 08 4:35AM | Thread Closed |
> I haven't written a poem in over a year, but I look at the faces of
> the Indigenous that I advocate for, and listen to the music that flies
> from the fingertips of my son, and smell the breeze that tickles the
> gum trees around the estuary where I reside, and I realize, that I'm
> living one.
that was a poem in itself, cw.
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| re: Hiatus violet 29 Jan 08 9:54AM | Thread Closed |
> I haven't written a poem in over a year, but I look at the faces of
> the Indigenous that I advocate for, and listen to the music that flies
> from the fingertips of my son, and smell the breeze that tickles the
> gum trees around the estuary where I reside, and I realize, that I'm
> living one.
Where do you live Cervus?
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| re: Hiatus nakedowl 29 Jan 08 10:01AM | Thread Closed |
Fantastic write, CW. Two thumbs up for this. Two thumbs down for not posting it where it belongs. I give this a 9 1/2 and add it to my favorites.
I haven't written a poem in
over a year, but I look
at the faces of the Indigenous
that I advocate for, and listen
to the music that flies
from the fingertips of my son,
and smell the breeze that tickles
the gum trees around the estuary
where I reside, and I realize,
that I'm living one.
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| re: Hiatus nakedowl 29 Jan 08 10:03AM | Thread Closed |
I'd play with the line breaks a little though. I've always sucked at line breaks in free verse and well, it is yours after all. :)
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| re: Hiatus unknown 29 Jan 08 8:14PM | Thread Closed |
yeah, dec 11th I was constapatied too.
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