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Baa, baa, black sheep  trochee  18 Mar 08 5:02AM Thread Closed

Have you any wool?

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  unknown  18 Mar 08 5:04AM Thread Closed

Yes, but it is all dirty and hanging on (the) line for all to see.

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  trochee  18 Mar 08 5:06AM Thread Closed

3 bags full?

I Love Little Pussy  trochee  18 Mar 08 5:11AM Thread Closed

Erotica for kids :)

    I love little pussy,
    Her coat is so warm,
    And if I don't hurt her,
    She'll do me no harm.
    So I'll not pull her tail,
    Nor drive her away,
    But pussy and I,
    Very gently will play.

re: I Love Little Pussy  amaviena  18 Mar 08 6:48AM Thread Closed

BOO.

revert to animal instincts.

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  unknown  18 Mar 08 7:54AM Thread Closed

Baa baa black sheep !
trochee you racist

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  Isabelle5  18 Mar 08 8:39AM Thread Closed

Trochee, did you have a point or just playing?

Of course I have wool, I am a crochet arist and doll maker!  We have all KINDS of wool!

imc

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  trochee  18 Mar 08 10:22AM Thread Closed

of course i do isabelle.

the writer of that poem assumes black sheep dont have enough wool. racists!

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  Isabelle5  18 Mar 08 10:35AM Thread Closed

You have a very unique way of digesting nursery rhymes, my friend!

I always thought of it as a man asking politely if the sheep had any wool to share.  

re: Baa, baa, black sheep  Isabelle5  18 Mar 08 12:51PM Thread Closed

Somebody has been watching those PETA tapes again.

I never knew that the sheep for the wool industry could be so cruelly treated.  It's an eye-opener.

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