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moderators: everything's okay, but this.  varun  19 Mar 08 5:35AM Thread Closed

somebody is posting using my name.

in all probability, it's joey - i see the use of language, the self-obsessive one-way-speech pattern.

but using my name under his drivel is jealousy going too far.

please check this up. it is getting ridiculous.


and joey, or whoever the fuck you are-
use the name your fat, toothless whore gave you, loser.





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woah, shit for brains -- i've haven't written anything like netsky since i was 25. that's really an insult and begs the question, sherlock, if you're really qualified to talk of anything but small breweries and busted condoms.

joey came on line after my mike bauer persona was banned by twitsky when she was drunk and fucking with the posts while she was supposedly modding and i called her on it. what i did, then, was start over as an officious twit pretending to be a recent MFA and wanting so much to be published some day. people still attacked my writing like they were scabrous unknowns, and i like to write, so i wrote back in that manner -- but, not always, if you'll check my posts -- most of the time i bend over to help any writer. unknowns don't do more than tag and run, though, and they don't want dialog. you don't either.

in any case i write as well as anyone here... look at how many poems i have in the top ten -- that's what you believe in isn't it? being a top ten?? and, i've not any in the top ten? that means i'm a bad writer, right?

i'm just a top, and you're a bottom feeder. this is like some trollery story dragged up by a stringer in cleveland to make a buck in pittsburg. come back later, hemingway.

- varun

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 7:10AM Thread Closed

Why not just email Mods :-   keatspc@gmail.com

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 9:03AM Thread Closed

i like poop

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  Isabelle5  19 Mar 08 9:41AM Thread Closed

Varun, I don't know what a mod could do.  They don't have any special powers of finding out who the culprit is, only the ability to delete some things.  Only Don T has the ability to check the behind the scenes things.  You could try e-mailing him.

Imc

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  themolly  19 Mar 08 2:18PM Thread Closed

this exact thing happened to me a few years ago. I emailed rafter and he checked up on it then posted a thread clearing my name. Whoever did it to me was being a total nag and ripping on people without mercy. It wasn't me, and I was really offended that people actually thought it was.

Anyhow, Mr. Tetto cleared everything up. I'm sure he'll do the same for you, varun. Good luck!

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 2:35PM Thread Closed

warren, dumsky, it was better writing than you've ever been able to write and it was obviously meant as a joke, because it was so obviously my writing. anyone would know that. now you've proved yourself not only to be a phony but also a sissy. that's very good, and gives you a more well rounded personality than you've had, and should allow you to write stronger and more honest writing -- or, at least, to get whomever writes your work to work harder.

the "whore..." part, i think, shows us what you actally are. it's not a pretty sight.

mike

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 3:00PM Thread Closed

Lame.  varun's a better writer than you; you can deny it all you want, but in the end your writing should be able to speak for itself, too bad it can't.  

Now I believe you said you were leaving.  Could you perhaps get on with that?  

> warren, dumsky, it was better writing than you've ever been able to
> write and it was obviously meant as a joke, because it was so
> obviously my writing. anyone would know that. now you've proved
> yourself not only to be a phony but also a sissy. that's very good,
> and gives you a more well rounded personality than you've had, and
> should allow you to write stronger and more honest writing -- or, at
> least, to get whomever writes your work to work harder.
>
> the "whore..." part, i think, shows us what you actally are. it's
> not a pretty sight.
>
> mike

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 6:37PM Thread Closed

joey will never leave. he's a parasite. he'll stay until he's dead or until he's killed the site entirely.

> Lame.  varun's a better writer than you; you can deny it all you
> want, but in the end your writing should be able to speak for itself,
> too bad it can't.  
>
> Now I believe you said you were leaving.  Could you perhaps get on
> with that?  

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 9:31PM Thread Closed

he's ok for trailer trash, and the trash here, like me, who are really good writers because we're trash can think anything we want of him. he's lower middle class, and his writing is that kind of writing that bed-wetters do when they can't get their dad's respect. the good writers here simply don't give a fuck about our dads. analyze an varun poem line by line, in the way that a reader with a talent for poetry will read his work and you'll see how he pushes only his personality on the reader, drowning the subject -- really not giving a fuck about what he's writing about -- and showing how mr. wonderful he is. it's a captive audience here, for him, and he's not a national level poet. he does what he does and nothing more. i assume you're a total word slob and suck emotion like you suck mashed potatoes. it's not my fault that you have to like someone like him and not me. i don't write for you, nor would i.


> Lame.  varun's a better writer than you; you can deny it all you
> want, but in the end your writing should be able to speak for itself,
> too bad it can't.  
>
> Now I believe you said you were leaving.  Could you perhaps get on
> with that?  
>
> > warren, dumsky, it was better writing than you've ever been able to
> > write and it was obviously meant as a joke, because it was so
> > obviously my writing. anyone would know that. now you've proved
> > yourself not only to be a phony but also a sissy. that's very good,
> > and gives you a more well rounded personality than you've had, and
> > should allow you to write stronger and more honest writing -- or, at
> > least, to get whomever writes your work to work harder.
> >
> > the "whore..." part, i think, shows us what you actally are. it's
> > not a pretty sight.
> >
> > mike

re: moderators: everything's okay, but this.  unknown  19 Mar 08 9:34PM Thread Closed

you're a fascist fuck and you bully. you've never given an critique which helped anyone here because this is your hot-tub and we are your cock-suckers. actually, you drowned four years ago and all these posts and "feeling" of yours is simply escaped gass from the bottom of the spa.

varun doesn't invent poetry. i do. that's why i'm needed here and why you're driving me out. go do american idol and let the t.v. blow you for awhile. you're not my critique.


> joey will never leave. he's a parasite. he'll stay until he's dead
> or until he's killed the site entirely.
>
> > Lame.  varun's a better writer than you; you can deny it all you
> > want, but in the end your writing should be able to speak for
> itself,
> > too bad it can't.  
> >
> > Now I believe you said you were leaving.  Could you perhaps get on
> > with that?  

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