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Library Of Congress Poetry Room  joey  19 Jun 08 5:35PM Thread Closed

L.C. poetry room, now staffed by wall-mart ex-salesclerks, cause nobody wanted to waste high saleries on literature and poetry anymore, and the clerks are all, "there's some nasty stuff in section three!"...

so, like, if poetry was important to the world which the liquifactionists and transactional normals want to pretend is its real domain, then donald trump would be the owner of poetry critical.

we're on our own.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  unknown  20 Jun 08 7:30AM Thread Closed

boy am i glad you decided to post about this, what a revelation.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  unknown  20 Jun 08 10:04AM Thread Closed

Taxi for Truman Capote

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  joey  20 Jun 08 12:06PM Thread Closed

well, you unknown's always seem to be crying for your mom to come in and spank us so's we'll like you better. i kind of wanted to say it easy, that your mom just walked out of the wall-mart and left you in the snack isle... sort of wanted to be easy about it so's you'd not get afraid... and i figured you'd think that song was about you, the one on the P.A. system, and i knew i could hack into it and inform you. are you formed? still seeing revelations?


> boy am i glad you decided to post about this, what a revelation.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  joey  20 Jun 08 12:45PM Thread Closed

ah, you're responding to the fact that probably the unknown unknown didn't understand the the thread was a comment on P.C. and on you specifically, ronald? can i ask you a sort of intimate question? when they stock the condoms at wallmart, do they have only men stock them or do the women get equa stockingl duty of all items? i imagine some of the country-boy and city-boy religious men would beg off for reasons of sensitivity? what was your experience?


> lol. are you aware that we hack into intercom systems at wal-mart?
>
> We got on MSNBC for that...

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  unknown  21 Jun 08 5:56AM Thread Closed

yawn.  as usual this goes no where.

> well, you unknown's always seem to be crying for your mom to come in
> and spank us so's we'll like you better. i kind of wanted to say it
> easy, that your mom just walked out of the wall-mart and left you in
> the snack isle... sort of wanted to be easy about it so's you'd not
> get afraid... and i figured you'd think that song was about you, the
> one on the P.A. system, and i knew i could hack into it and inform
> you. are you formed? still seeing revelations?
>
>
> > boy am i glad you decided to post about this, what a revelation.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  joey  21 Jun 08 3:01PM Thread Closed

you understand that your small imagination and george bush level i.q. is what's keeping you locked inside your "ironic, so bored" understanding? and, that, if you could visualize and respond on the level of the author instead of bringing things down to your comfortable for you level, you'd understand so much more than what you're understanding here in the site? it's as though you really shouldn't be here -- that mytube and yourface sites might really be where you'd thrive, because they're simply not that verbal -- you can make woo-woo dots and iggy eyes and people would love you. go find the love, baybee.

it's probably going to be as hard for you as high school biology was for you... and the teacher's all, "well, think of it as a pizza..." and you still didn't get it.


> yawn.  as usual this goes no where.
>
> > well, you unknown's always seem to be crying for your mom to come
> in
> > and spank us so's we'll like you better. i kind of wanted to say
> it
> > easy, that your mom just walked out of the wall-mart and left you in
> > the snack isle... sort of wanted to be easy about it so's you'd
> not
> > get afraid... and i figured you'd think that song was about you,
> the
> > one on the P.A. system, and i knew i could hack into it and inform
> > you. are you formed? still seeing revelations?
> >
> >
> > > boy am i glad you decided to post about this, what a revelation.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  unknown  22 Jun 08 6:06AM Thread Closed

once again... yawn.  i think you're projecting joey.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  joey  22 Jun 08 5:15PM Thread Closed

that would maybe need a comma after "projecting", unless you think i'm some sort of extra-dimensional projecting myself into your uncomforted space... or at least into that gaping hole of your yawn. i'd like to work with you, but you're unflaggingly narrow minded, and i think that, even if i were to get you so that you'd write poetry in a more honest manner, that the forms and patterns you'd invent would just look like table cloth. there's a place for you, an audience, and i think you ought to work with one of the beginngin writers here -- someone who'd believe in you more than i could. it takes a fool to teach a fool.


> once again... yawn.  i think you're projecting joey.

re: Library Of Congress Poetry Room  unknown  22 Jun 08 6:35PM Thread Closed

are you really going to criticize my punctuation?  really?  is that how low you have sunk?  you got me i forgot a comma.  i thought though that you'd have something better.  you know maybe a crack at my parents (which you ingeniously borrowed from your own life or something you read on another internet site while you were trolling around there slamming people for their inability to pop zits while holding an x-box controller).

i find it hilarious that you're accusing me of being "narrow-minded," while displaying the textbook characteristics yourself.  you basically narrow-mindedly accused me of being narrow-minded not to mention a poor writer.  but whatever, what i don't understand is why you insist on telling me you want to work with me as if i'm somehow resisting your altruistic motives and brilliant methodology.  let's get one thing straight you do not want to work with anyone here.  working with other writers would require you to assess writing critically to break past your own meagerly established conceptions of art.  what you do and want to do with less interference from those of us smart enough to smell your bullshit is to work at others -- you know -- continuing to pop the tabs out of your favorite cut-out responses about someone's allegedly mediocre life and how it prevents them from writing... blah blah blah.  

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