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re: boink -- 62  Isabelle5  24 Jun 08 1:40PM Thread Closed

It's your birthday?  I thought you were my age!  

It doesn't feel like it takes a long time to get to where were are, more like a couple of blinks.

Hope you find some peace and joy today.  

Isabelle

re: boink -- 62  dele  24 Jun 08 1:58PM Thread Closed

Happy birthday!
I find it frightening that you're pretty much the same age as my father.

re: boink -- 62  joey  24 Jun 08 2:02PM Thread Closed

umm, i hate to say it here, like this, but, internet being what it is... i am your dad -- sorry, i would have told you, but i diin't want to prejudice your crits on my poems.

home for dinner?

re: boink -- 62  unknown  24 Jun 08 2:40PM Thread Closed

no i dont like to watch
birthday crumbs or cum
on my dad's face

re: boink -- 62  starr  24 Jun 08 3:12PM Thread Closed

Happy Birthday, Mike.  :-)  62, huh?  Wow...you're my mom's age.

re: boink -- 62  markfelician  24 Jun 08 4:51PM Thread Closed

;) happy birthday Joey! Thank you for your poems and have a great life!

re: boink -- 62  markfelician  24 Jun 08 4:54PM Thread Closed

and i thought you were some 18 year-old crazy punk haha

re: boink -- 62  OKcomputer  24 Jun 08 10:25PM Thread Closed

younger than bob dylaaaaaaaaan

re: boink -- 62  unknown  25 Jun 08 3:59AM Thread Closed

joey is over 60? thats a shocker.

re: boink -- 62  unknown  25 Jun 08 5:07AM Thread Closed

An old has bean - half baked.

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