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... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  5 Jul 08 11:43PM Thread Closed

CHUNKS END HIGH MIST-TEAR LARRY CIRCUIT BYPASS LARK
fractalcore

we either
neglect or
ignore the
signs

often do
we neither
notice nor see

circles are
triangles
really

no sides taken
nor areas squared
cubed much less

only solid
flat out repetitious
angles
and curves

bipolar infinitely singular
problem[']s solved

real members
equal[s]
undefined you
plush or less
meme


witten 07/05/08
http://poetrycritic al.net/read/48857/
thanks and hi, mister larry circuit bypass lark.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  5 Jul 08 11:44PM Thread Closed

HOUR IS A GREAT METAGLASS
fractalcore

10 REM fractals and glass sculptures
20 cls; input "what's your name?"; U$
30 for X = 1 to ∞
40 cls; ? "...you are reality amplified @ the sun's core, "; U$;"..."
50 next X
60 ? "what's your name again? : )"


written 07/05/08
http://poetrycritic al.net/read/49461/
thanks, technomancer.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 12:34AM Thread Closed

WHAT WAS I THINKING?
fractalcore

me hate me.
er, hateS.

erhatesetahre
rhatesesetahr
hateseresetah
ateserhreseta
teserhahreset  
eserhatahrese
serhatetahres

sorry.

sorryrros
orrysyrro
rrysosyrr
rysorosyr
ysorrrosy

you hated me 'coz i ate the chess set
i was losing bad when we reset
for the ninth, er Nth, game
hah! i missed my hat in that
stormy, gloomy room

now you still hate me
ah am sorry
or so i think
as i sing Sting

and my cheek turns
so rosy as you slap me
there me thinking

hate is a constipated thing.


written 07/0508
here @ http://poetrycritical.net/forum/post/149327/
as inspired by the poem
@ http://poetrycritical.net/read/15652/
thanks, Inuki.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 12:42AM Thread Closed

fractalAIN'T-STAY'Ncore
fractalcore

really did i think i
ain't-stay'n
here

but hear
i am
regular.

i'll tell
you about it
later.


written 07/03/08
http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/149294/
thanks, OKcomputer.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 12:49AM Thread Closed

> HOUR IS A GREAT METAGLASS
> fractalcore
>
> 10 REM fractals and glass sculptures
> 20 cls; input "what's your name?"; U$
> 30 for X = 1 to ∞
> 40 cls; ? "...you are reality amplified @ the sun's core, ";
> U$;"..."
> 50 next X
> 60 ? "what's your name again? : )"
>
>
> written 07/05/08
> http://poetrycritic al.net/read/49461/
> thanks, technomancer.
> : )


make that


HOUR IS A GREAT METAGLASS
fractalcore

10 REM fractals and glass sculptures
20 cls; input "what's your name?"; U$
30 for X = 1 until keypressed
40 ? "...you are reality amplified @ the sun's core, "; U$;"... ";
50 next X; cls
60 ? "what's your name again? : )"


written 07/05/08
http://poetrycritic al.net/read/49461/
thanks, technomancer.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 12:52AM Thread Closed

i meant


HOURS IS A GREAT METAGLASS
fractalcore

10 REM fractals and glass sculptures
20 cls; input "what's your name?"; U$
30 for X = 1 to ∞
40 cls; ? "...you are reality amplified @ the sun's core, "; U$;"..."
50 next X
60 ? "what's your name again? : )"


written 07/05/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49461/
thanks, technomancer.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 1:19AM Thread Closed

darn:
i meant


HOURS IS A GREAT METAGLASS
fractalcore

10 REM fractals and glass sculptures
20 cls; input "what's your name? "U$
30 for X = 1 until keypressed
40 ? "...you are reality amplified @ the sun's core, "; U$;"... ";
50 next X
60 input ? "what's your name again? : )"


written 07/05/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49461/
thanks, technomancer.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 1:36AM Thread Closed

darn again:
i meant


HOURS IS A GREAT METAGLASS
fractalcore

10 REM fractals and glass sculptures
20 cls; input "what's your name? "U$
30 for X = 1 until keypressed
40 ? "...you are reality amplified @ the sun's core, "; U$;"... ";
50 next X
60 ? "what's your name again? : )"


written 07/05/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49461/
thanks, technomancer.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 1:48AM Thread Closed

make that



WHAT WAS I THINKING?
fractalcore

me hate me.
er, hateS.

erhatesetahre
rhatesesetahr
hateseresetah
ateserhreseta
teserhahreset  
eserhatahrese
serhatetahres

sorry.

sorryrros
or>rysyrro
rrysosyrr
rysorosyr
ysorrrosy

you hated me 'coz i ate the chess set
i was losing bad at it when we reset
for the ninth, er Nth, game
hah! i missed my hat in that
stormy, gloomy room

now you still hate me
ah am sorry
or so i think
as i sing Sting

and my cheek turns
so rosy as you slap me
there me thinking

hate is a constipated thing.


written 07/0508
here @ http://poetrycritical.net/forum/post/149327/
as inspired by the poem
@ http://poetrycritical.net/read/15652/
thanks, Inuki.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 1:52AM Thread Closed

oh shit.



WHAT WAS I THINKING?
fractalcore

me hate me.
er, hateS.

erhatesetahre
rhatesesetahr
hateseresetah
ateserhreseta
teserhahreset  
eserhatahrese
serhatetahres

sorry.

sorryrros
orrysyrro
rrysosyrr
rysorosyr
ysorrrosy

you hated me 'coz i ate the chess set
i was losing bad when we reset
for the ninth, er Nth, game
hah! i missed my hat in that
stormy, gloomy room

now you still hate me
ah am sorry
or so i think
as i sing Sting

and my cheek turns
so rosy as you slap me
there me thinking

hate is a constipated thing.


written 07/0508
here @ http://poetrycritical.net/forum/post/149327/
as inspired by the poem
@ http://poetrycritical.net/read/15652/
thanks, Inuki.
: )

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