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re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 2:13AM Thread Closed

RAGE IN [T]HIS AGE | AGE IN [T]HIS RAGE
fractalcore

against the machine
we stomp we kick
ass we imagine
of those we loath

we drop a penny a quarter
a dime, damn dozen
no water for the thirst

run for life or run
for position --
what's the point?
what's in or the
question?

public face, integrity
always a collition
pub[l]ic hair unkempt
or otherwise

no votes for no reason
be wise.


written 07/05/08
http://poetrycritic al.net/read/49268/
thanks, Aziel.

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 2:17AM Thread Closed

make that


RAGE IN [T]HIS AGE | AGE IN [T]HIS RAGE
fractalcore

against the machine
we stomp we kick
ass we imagine
[of] those we loath

we drop a penny a quarter
a dime, damn dozen
no water for the thirst

run for life or run
for position --
what's the point?
what's in or the
question?

public face, integrity
always a collition
pub[l]ic hair unkempt
or otherwise

no votes for no reason
be wise.


written 07/06/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49268/
thanks, Aziel.
: )

re: ... [anything under the sun (or moon) -- a sequel]  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 2:26AM Thread Closed

again
make that


RAGE IN [T]HIS AGE | AGE IN [T]HIS RAGE
fractalcore

against the machine
we stomp we kick
ass we imagine
[of] those we loathe

we drop a penny a quarter
a dime, damn dozen
no water for the thirst

run for life or run
for position --
what's the point?
what's in or the
question?

public face, integrity
always a collition
pub[l]ic hair unkempt
or otherwise

no votes for no reason
be wise.


written 07/06/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49268/
thanks, Aziel.
: )

buried in my own shit  fractalcore  6 Jul 08 4:36PM Thread Closed

really deep shit.



WHAT WAS I THINKING? | OR SO I THINK.
fractalcore

me hate me.
er, hateS.

erhatesetahre
rhatesesetahr
hateseresetah
ateserhreseta
teserhahreset  
eserhatahrese
serhatetahres

sorry.

sorryrros
orrysyrro
rrysosyrr
rysorosyr
ysorrrosy

you hated me 'coz i ate the chess set
i was losing bad at it when we reset
for the ninth, er Nth, game
hah! i missed my hat in that
stormy, gloomy room

now you still hate me
ah am sorry
or so i think
as i sing Sting

and my cheek turns
so rosy as you slap me
there me thinking

hate is a constipated thing.


written 07/06/08
here @ http://poetrycritical.net/forum/post/149327/
as inspired by the poem
@ http://poetrycritical.net/read/15652/
thanks, Inuki.
: )

re: buried in my own shit  Mongrol  7 Jul 08 2:13AM Thread Closed

a great poetic ride... appears at first like the ramblings of a mad person ... but reveals a little more with each step...
good stuff fractal

re: buried in my own shit  fractalcore  7 Jul 08 5:00AM Thread Closed

hi, Mong.

thanks for the unexpected visit and the kind words.
: )

re: buried in my own shit  AlchemiA  7 Jul 08 4:25PM Thread Closed

you're morphing fractalisciousness and the invertendo realEYEsations are gathering into a storm of inWORDS out without a doubt while blessing the brain with soothing prayers rolling off the tongue in affirmations

re: buried in my own shit  fractalcore  7 Jul 08 7:43PM Thread Closed

ey, AlchemiA!

good to see you back to [y]our beloved username.
i think i got a new one for today.

thanks for the visit.
: )

re: buried in my own shit  fractalcore  7 Jul 08 7:45PM Thread Closed

ATTN UNKNOWN: GOT ME?
fractalcore


ATTN UNKNOWN:

A = 1
T = 20
T = 20
N = 14

U = 21
N = 14
K = 11
N = 14
O = 15
W = 23
N = 14
______
     167


GOT ME ?

G = 7
O = 15
T = 20

M = 13
E = 5
______
      60


now you got
167 and 60.

multiply all
the individual digits
except zero:

1 * 6 * 7 * 6 = 252 then
in comes our magic
number 13.

add the digits of 252
and multiply the sum by
the digits of 13 then

multiply the digits of
the end-product with
the digits of
13 then

multiply the digits of
the new end-product
with the digits of
13 then

repeat the last procedure
to your heart's content
and feel it burn at
the core of you,
INFINIT[EL]Y.


2 + 5 + 2 = 9
9 * 1 * 3 = 27

2 * 7 * 1 * 3 = 42
4 * 2 * 1 * 3 = 24

2 * 4 * 1 * 3 = 24
2 * 4 * 1 * 3 = 24

2 * 4 * 1 * 3 = 24
        ... ∞ ...

and

in the End
you'll realize
you're left
with the same
digits right
before yore
eyes

like matchsticks setting --
the Sun -- your Heart
aflame.

Start picking up the pieces
and count:

1 + 2 + 3 + 4 = 10

that's all there is --
a perfect binary
bipolar Duality
yet One,

a gift adrift
free.


written 07/07/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49519/
thank you infinitely, Unknown.
; )

re: buried in my own shit  fractalcore  7 Jul 08 8:24PM Thread Closed

sorry but
make that




ATTN UNKNOWN: GOT ME?
fractalcore


ATTN UNKNOWN:

A = 1
T = 20
T = 20
N = 14

U = 21
N = 14
K = 11
N = 14
O = 15
W = 23
N = 14
______
     167


GOT ME ?

G = 7
O = 15
T = 20

M = 13
E = 5
______
      60


now you got
167 and 60.

multiply all
the individual digits
except zero:

1 * 6 * 7 * 6 = 252 then
in comes our magic
number, 13.

add the digits of 252
and multiply the sum by
the digits of 13 then

multiply the digits of
the end-product with
the digits of
13 then

multiply the digits of
the new end-product
with the digits of
13 then

repeat the last procedure
to your heart's content
and feel it burn at
the core of you,
INFINIT[EL]Y.


2 + 5 + 2 = 9
9 * 1 * 3 = 27

2 * 7 * 1 * 3 = 42
4 * 2 * 1 * 3 = 24

2 * 4 * 1 * 3 = 24
2 * 4 * 1 * 3 = 24

1 * 2 * 3 * 4 = 24
        ... ∞ ...

and

indie End
you'll realize
you're left
with the same
digits right
before yore
eyes

like matchsticks setting --
the Sun -- your Heart
aflame.

[K]NOW.

Start picking up the pieces
and count:


1 + 2 + 3 + 4 = 10


that's all there is --
a perfect binary
bipolar Duality
yet One,

a gift adrift

...free...



written 07/07/08
http://poetrycritical.net/read/49519/
thank you infinitely, Unknown.
; )

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