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re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  OKcomputer  3 Aug 08 4:09PM Thread Closed

jesus god i love you terribly, lets never meet, it will be an anxious disaster


> INCREDIBLE LURK
> fractalcore
>
> it's really nice to be in this DreamSeaLand.
> how's your reading of the book or Rand's?
>
> well, you never change, buddy.
> you're a green dormant computer who's OK
> till we/you blow your top and your brain
> muscles pop way in a fit revealing your wit
> tearing your dress apart, doing your
>
> part in the dialog, or monologuing your asss...
> ...sssumptions on a well-thought day or
> mindfullesst like the FUCKLEWIT atlas
>
> rebuilding the old new world by the simplest
> gesture of a shrug for all the fucklewit-wannabees
> to thrive in, riding the lightning motor of [r]evolution
>
> so incessantly
> you stay/go/lurk, girl.
>
> [w]i'll keep the green light on for you.
>
>
> written 07/14/08
> http://poetrycritical.net/forum/post/149660/
> for OKcomputer.
> thanks, buddy.
> : )

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  fractalcore  3 Aug 08 4:19PM Thread Closed

ok, i'll post that one instead of "the digits of your hands and feat".

this is where the kindred meet
so i think we're all in great shape.

: )

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  fractalcore  21 Aug 08 12:12AM Thread Closed

GNORMAL
fractalcore

yes ohm ye yes a
rehurt by yo ufo
old ear to PC.


senryu #2
written 6/3/08
thanks, gnormal.
; )

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  netskyIam  21 Aug 08 2:59AM Thread Closed

I shouldn't say anything here
but I will because this is a sweet, celebratory thread-song
of your good life. Speech, speech:

An artichoke
never would or could
execute its latter half;
not while under the spell
of your verbal spoon.

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  Mongrol  21 Aug 08 8:01AM Thread Closed

love love reading your streams of steaming fractal ;)

keep it up

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  unknown  21 Aug 08 8:55AM Thread Closed

Someone said this is the thread posting for posting shit poetry

I give this load of crap many tens,
mongrol could probably give it more-
Some one somewhere must be keeping score
I must not rise too quickly
in case I get the lend lease bends
for its where many a bad air ends.
when we are feeling sickly.

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  Mongrol  21 Aug 08 9:08AM Thread Closed

ignore mor ;)

he is stalking the young and tender mong these days...



~ (the young and tender) Mong

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  unknown  21 Aug 08 9:13AM Thread Closed

Mong you are getting to be a real pain and behaving like spoiled brat, why don’t you just go sit in the corner and suck your lollypop

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  Mongrol  21 Aug 08 10:00AM Thread Closed

> Mong you are getting to be a real pain and behaving like spoiled brat,
> why don’t you just go sit in the corner and suck your lollypop

lollipop.


~ (the young and tender) Mong

re: hope this thread won't ever get closed : )  unknown  21 Aug 08 10:54AM Thread Closed

Poor little mong he is much too young to understand the sexual innuendo of lollypop.
Every time he posts he merely shows another facet of ignorance.

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