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| comments DeformedLion 18 Aug 08 11:30PM | Thread Closed |
i like getting them from god, as if through that pale sky a finger touches my eye and i am warmed by an eternal-external sun-- both really, manifold and fodder for the mind to munch on like nachos expressed through comma and colon, yep, out the ass into whitespace and though the aqueducts of time.
but that isn't at all what i am saying, through the validation of god i have written a poem because god said so by commenting on the poem as a poem and not a blog or a one of those little garden things you draw lines on. with the sand and stuff.
but through all this validation i wonder if the comment broaches the poem as a poem or the poet as the poem-er. err, erstwile in the garden of eden Adam has just commented on the rotund nature of Eve's ass. Eve called Adam a pig and made him go sleep on the couch. that's an assalogy...analogy.
what's that God? Oh, no, you shut up! stoopid face.
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| re: comments joey 19 Aug 08 8:08AM | Thread Closed |
for us, 'god' is language, and language is the thing that we do when we connect things, and language isn't word, it's motion on the world. the bit in the old testament, where the wind is on the water, or whatever, is maybe one theo-philosophical move, in those days and somewhere, and had to be included. but the idea of motion - verb - is the basis of language.
my question back to you is, when we come to a conclusion about something -- make an idea, name a thing, think a thought, is it that the truth has been revealed or is it that we've got tired of all the possibilities and given up and just stopped at the truck stop of culture?
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| re: comments chuckle_s 19 Aug 08 8:24AM | Thread Closed |
u iz funie jo-jo!
'god' = language
language = the thing that we do when we connect things
language = motion on the world
thus
the thing that we do when we connect things = motion on the world
idea of motion = verb
verb = basis of language
language = not word
basis of not word = verb
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| re: comments joey 19 Aug 08 8:55AM | Thread Closed |
all you wrote and write here, and all your projection of 'laugh', is in word. you want us to know god -- you're telling us where to find god -- and word is your gift -- you can't escape that, that's for sure. if you really thought god was sex, you wouldn't be on this site.
> u iz funie jo-jo!
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> 'god' = language
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> language = the thing that we do when we connect things
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> language = motion on the world
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> thus
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> the thing that we do when we connect things = motion on the world
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> idea of motion = verb
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> verb = basis of language
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> language = not word
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> basis of not word = verb
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| re: comments chuckle_s 19 Aug 08 9:42AM | Thread Closed |
akchilly, incidentally, i was at wal-mart sayurdee for a long-overdue visit!
i'd have half a mind to say ur 2 smart...
just found your response amusing. in a scissors with arced blades kinda way.
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| re: comments DeformedLion 19 Aug 08 11:33AM | Thread Closed |
truck-stops are too clean and pretty for culture. culture has no place in a place.
instead, i say, culture is whatever is on the television.
been watching The Wire- maybe the greatest television show ever. comment. but certainly when thought circles itself then when or where does it begin, at creation? no. creation is just a fancy way of saying nothing at all whilst time creates time upon a melody.
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| re: comments unknown 19 Aug 08 11:54AM | Thread Closed |
Obviously any one who watches American television is brain dead.
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| re: comments trochee 19 Aug 08 10:50PM | Thread Closed |
> Obviously any one who watches American television is brain dead.
its a conspiracy to keep the americans busy and away from thinking too much about more important things in life.
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| re: comments DeformedLion 19 Aug 08 11:12PM | Thread Closed |
What about Sesame Street?
> > Obviously any one who watches American television is brain dead.
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> its a conspiracy to keep the americans busy and away from thinking too
> much about more important things in life.
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| re: comments trochee 19 Aug 08 11:16PM | Thread Closed |
what about the recurring commercials throughout?
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