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| He can be a nutter twerpsky... unknown 20 Aug 08 2:30AM | Thread Closed |
but it is he (and his elk) that make this place, the place to bee ski.
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... unknown 20 Aug 08 2:51AM | Thread Closed |
no moose is good moose
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... unknown 20 Aug 08 4:20AM | Thread Closed |
> but it is he (and his elk) that make this place, the place to bee ski.
stags in a rut
no boner for elke
somme r prefers
a sting in the tail
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... unknown 20 Aug 08 12:16PM | Thread Closed |
heheh ^^ to both :) I sense a certain warmth 'neath these cloaks of humor.
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... netskyIam 20 Aug 08 12:25PM | Thread Closed |
> stags in a rut
> no boner for elke
> somme r prefers
> a sting in the tail
kudos for a verse worthy of a mash of nash and wilde!
I offer this congrat especially freely for the knowing that the verse was not by a joey*
*he =can't= write sharp humour nor any sort of punning word play*
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... joey 20 Aug 08 12:28PM | Thread Closed |
schlepper in wet-ski,
the tag-along netsky --
surfing the posts,
jelly-fish toast.
> > stags in a rut
> > no boner for elke
> > somme r prefers
> > a sting in the tail
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> kudos for a verse worthy of a mash of nash and wilde!
> I offer this congrat especially freely for the knowing that the verse
> was not by a joey*
>
>
> *he =can't= write sharp humour nor any sort of punning word play*
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... joey 20 Aug 08 12:33PM | Thread Closed |
something's up, and maybe it's got something to do with yur sex problem, but you really sound like Mor these days -- all pouty and resentful, and shooting off quick and ill-constructed comments, as though you didn't really care but were somehow in panic -- desperate for actualization -- here in this field of house-cats, looking at you like you were a mouse and wondering how fast you can run.
are you sick, or did you worried about getting kicked out or losing your shelter -- i can't imagine it's anything deeper than this -- like you were in creative crisis or anything.
we're all worried about getting kicked out of something, but some of us create our way into coping with it by creating and taking care of others.
> > stags in a rut
> > no boner for elke
> > somme r prefers
> > a sting in the tail
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> kudos for a verse worthy of a mash of nash and wilde!
> I offer this congrat especially freely for the knowing that the verse
> was not by a joey*
>
>
> *he =can't= write sharp humour nor any sort of punning word play*
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... netskyIam 20 Aug 08 12:36PM | Thread Closed |
joey just scribbled,QUOTE (confirms my point above that he can't write anything that is not totally insipid
schlepper in wet-ski,
the tag-along netsky --
surfing the posts,
jelly-fish toast.
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| re: He can be a nutter twerpsky... joey 20 Aug 08 1:02PM | Thread Closed |
yo'r really doing a mor -- this is pretty sharp, though maybe not bubble-gum lyric enough to work on you? can you practice reading poetry a little?
read some ogden nash and dorothy parker -- don't read robert bly anymore -- he's a mortician. can you follow the form of writing, can you go with the flow and turn kinetically with the author? or, is it that you're frozen and dead at heart, not alive enough to do more than watch the flickering shadows with faces and hear the hoomy-toon melodies to go with your ... ah, 'teeny martoony'? you get the reference, yes? smack back with a line from something interesting, or write one yourself -- this is a poet's place, after all.
thanks for your not, morsky. it was a real jelly-fish's comment on them surfer-boys.
> joey just scribbled,QUOTE (confirms my point above that he can't
> write anything that is not totally insipid
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> schlepper in wet-ski,
> the tag-along netsky --
> surfing the posts,
> jelly-fish toast.
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